Since my post last night, I’ve been thinking about Demon War and the opening 7 pages (the non-finaling pages ). I think I’m going to refocus my efforts on writing this in 3rd person pov. Looking back at the current opening I can objectively see some “mistakes”. For example, I started it with the main [...]
Archive for August, 2008
Openings
Posted in Uncategorized on August 12, 2008 | 1 Comment »
Posted in Uncategorized on August 11, 2008 | 1 Comment »
Well, even though I wasn’t a finalist with Demon Storm (that’s the new title), I’m going to keep plugging away on it. Though I might change the pov from first to third. I know that first tends to be the predominant trend in urban fantasy and I feel like I have a pretty good voice [...]
Not a finalist
Posted in Uncategorized on August 10, 2008 | 2 Comments »
Unlike last year, I am not a finalist this year in the Emerald City Opener contest. Oh well… I thought my opening seven pages were pretty strong, at least as engaging as last year’s entry. But, I suppose in the end it all depends on who is doing the judging. I write a lot in [...]
